What is review
text
1.
Definition
Review is
one of text genres. This classification of text types is commonly based on the
structure which used by the writer to compose his text. Each text type will
have different form of generic structure. As I said in my previous post, review
text usually has generic structure as:
2.
Generic
Structure
Introduction:
it is the highlight of the general description about what will be reviewed. It
can be product, services which want to be sold, or just a site which want to be
known publicly. Then it will drive more traffic into the site.
Evaluation:
the second phase is coming inside into the product in details. It states the
parts, uniqueness, quality of the product which will be known publicly. However
too much detail description will “teach” the will-buyer and it does not sound
good. Evaluating as far as necessary for the targeted buyer is more genuine.
The term of evaluation will not be far from simple word of good or bad. In this
phase reviewer will apply much evaluative word, valuable, useful, worthy, etc.
Interpretation:
after writing about the objective thing of the product, it is the time for
reviewer to write about what he thinks or impresses on the product. Of course
this phase can be done after getting enough evaluation on the product. It is
personal idea about the product. Frequently to support and strengthen his idea
or impression, a reviewer describes a comparison to other similar product. He
states in which side the product has additional value or honestly admitted that
the product lacks value in certain side.
Summary:
this phase is recommending conclusion for reader of the product. After clearly
explanation, a reviewer will make a final comment whether the product is
valuable or not for targeted buyer. This phase is the worth of the review for
reader.
3.
Dominant
Language features:
1. Focus on specific participants
2. Using adjectives
3. Using long and complex clauses
4. Using metaphor
4.
Examples
and structures of the text
Harry Potter: Order of the Phoenix |
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Pengenalan / Orientasi
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I absolutely love the Harry
Potter series, and all of the books will always hold a special place in my
heart.
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Evaluasi 1
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I have to say that of all of
the books, however, this was not my favorite.
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Evaluasi 2
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When the series began it was as
much of a "feel good" experience as a huge mug of hot cocoa. The
stories were bright, fast-paced, intriguing, and ultimately satisfying.
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Tafsiran (Interpretative recount)
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Order of the Phoenix is a different kind of book. In
some instances this works...you feel a whole new level of intensity and
excitement by the time you get to the end. I was truly moved by the last
page. Other times the book just has a slightly dreary, depressing feel. The
galloping pace of the other books has slowed to a trot here, and parts of it
do seem long, as if we're reading all about Harry "just hanging
out" instead of having his usual adventures. Reading in detail about
Harry cleaning up an old house, for example - housekeeping is still
housekeeping, magical or no, and I'm not very interested in doing it or reading
about other people doing it.
A few other changes in
this book - the "real" world comes much more in to play rather than
the fantasy universe of the previous books, and Harry has apparently been
taken off his meds. I know that he had a lot to be grumpy in this book,
especially with being a teenager and all, but the sudden change in his
character seemed too drastic. He goes from being a warm-hearted, considerate
person to someone who will bite his best friend's heads off over nothing. It
just seemed like it didn't fit with his character, like he turned into a
walking cliché of the "angry teen" overnight.
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Rangkuman
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The "real" story
seemed to happen in the last 1/3 of the book, and this part I loved. I
actually liked the ending (and yes, I cried!) as sad as it was. It packed a
punch and it made me care about the story even more. Still a really good
book, with some editing it would have been great.
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Example of
Review text
A. Zenni Optical; a site for eyeglasses
Eyeglasses will become more and more important. It is not only because
for protecting our eyes from the hot light but also for holding the trend.
There are a lot of online sites which provides products of eyeglasses but Zenni Optical was on FOX news! is just the
perfect one.
If we visit the site, we will easily catch various information about
eyeglasses. The site is quite simple but very informative. It is real, easy and
not complicated design. With quick loading this site will bring us quickly in
to what we want.
There is
information about Variable Dimension Frames From Zenni.
Titanium, aluminum and rimless frame are available. The eyeglasses are designed
for different users. Eyeglasses for children, woman and man are available
choice. Again, what makes it different is this site gives the Great Eyeglasses For Less cost. The
product can be sold in cheap price because it has cut the marketing link. It
straightly goes to the end user.
B. Good Translation
Translation is transferring not only words by word but also message to
message. In certain case, it will be quite difficult to make translation. How
is to make good Arabic translation from
English phrase of “as white as snow” meanwhile there is no snow in Arabian?
The basic requirement of a good translator is mastering resource and
target language with all non-linguistic aspect . If he is an English translator
and wants to make Hindi translation, he
should understand well the language and aspect of India. Similarly, if he works with Farsi translation, he has to be familiar
with linguistics and non-linguistics of Farsian.
However, translation providers can bridge that difficulty. The
translation experts, such as India
translation will help to fix the problem. The experts who have
grammatical, lexical, sociolinguistics specialization will match in
transferring the message from one language to another language.
C. Recording Mommy Journey
Life itself is a journey. For Rosemarie, a pretty young Filipino single mother for 2-year
kid, the daily activities are worthily documented. The site is her effort to
record of what she did, does and will do daily.
The site consists of several topic; family, motherhood, shopping,
money, love fashion and shopping. These topics are close related to her own
life. She is not only young but also pretty and she has a kid. These topics
will be useful to her. Rosemarie is also interested with making money,
internet, business, computer, loan and other interesting stuff. She is a widely
knowledge mom.
The template design of her site is very girly, pink centered. She has
arranged her site very attractive, fresh and bright. Again, this physical
appearing site must represent her personal mood because she is a young and
pretty mom. I like this site and you, young mothers, surely will like the site
too.
D. Good Young Mother
It is about a young mother. It has a title of yummy mummy. This blog is
representative of her idea of becoming young mother. He pours her thought and
opinion on this blog in relating her position of a mother of kid and a wife of
a husband. Beside that, she is trying to monetizing it
This blog has fresh physical appearance. She choose green border of her
template. She is young therefore she has to have a blog look fresh and
energetic. She looks to have strong care to her baby that is why we find her
monthly calendar of feeding milk to her baby attaches on the header of the
blog.
She is not only a good mother for her baby but also a good wife for her
husband. She expresses it in her post labeled wedding anniversary. It is a
romantic scene. In the last she is monetizing this blog. It must help her
husband support financially the family. It is really a reference blog for every
young mother and wife.
E. Recommended Software Applications
Software application have grown to their density. A lot of softwares
have been offered to us. They claim that they are the best product. A buyer is
really a king. He/she has so many choices to select which he/she likes most. In
one side, this phenomenon present us comparable software products but, in the
other hands, it make us complicated to choose.
Due to this complex phenomenon of consumer, a review site is necessary. It will be a
recommending bridge between consumer and producer. A good reviewer will place
hes/her self in the middle arena. He/she will not tend to specially software
producer or absolutely consumer. He/she just presents the real description of
the product. He/she will observes to find the good and bad side of the product.
In the last, he/she will recommends whether the reviewed products deserve to
choose or not. That is really helpful for consumer.
Review (Ulasan atau tinjauan)
Ciri Umum:
(a)
Tujuan Komunikatif
Teks:
Melakukan kritik terhadap peristiwa
atau karya seni untuk pembaca atau pendengar halayak ramai, misalnya film,
pertunjukan, buku, dll.
(b) Struktur Teks:
ü Pengenalan;(orientation)
ü Evaluasi 1;
ü Evaluasi 2;
ü Tafsir;(Interpretive)
ü Evaluasi 3;
ü Evaluasi 4, dsb. Jika ada;
ü Rangkuman.(Evaluative Summation)
(c) Ciri Kebahasaan:
Terfokus pada partisipan tertentu;
Menggunakan:
·
adjectives menunjukkan
sikap, seperti bad, good;
·
klausa panjang dan
kompleks;
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metafor.